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My World of Warcraft Tale - Please Rate It in the Comments Below!
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Post by
R1TeR
Decent read, but might wanna tone it down with having ashbringer and fighting the lich king etc.....
Post by
Adamsm
Way too much jumping around. And yeah, there's no point at putting yourself in the place of Tirion.
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oneforthemoney
It was a pretty good story, I have to say. The interlocking between his fighting the Lich King and a reminiscing about his life I believe is the real strength of the story. However it was a bit choppy, so I might suggest either smoothing that out somewhat so they lead into each other more seamlessly, or are clearly two different events occurring simultaneously. Maybe his recollections being summoned due to him thinking about how this event is what his life had been leading to, thus his stroll down memory lane.
Aside from that, as the two above me said, maybe tone back Aleric's adventures somewhat. Tirion being there yet seeing the ashbringer in Aleric's hand was a bit jarring, but I liked the idea of him going on a journey to find his armour. He doesn't need to be on the forefront of everything after all, and more personalized quests help add depth to the character.
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Monday
I have to agree with the others. I enjoy stories that interlock flashbacks with current action (a lot). However, I dislike self inserts.
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